IELTS Academic writing : Process by which bricks are manufactured for the building industry.

The diagram below shows the bricks manufacturing process IELTS by which bricks are manufactured for the building industry. 

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. 

Sample Answer:1

The information illustrated in the pictorial representation gives insights into the step by step procedure followed for bricks building process for the construction businesses. 

To begin with, the process starts with digging of clay, a special type of mud which is sticky in nature and is used for pottery and making other things, by the digger. The clay dug from earth is passed over to a metal grid over a roller, to filter out the fine material from the raw stuff. The material so obtained is mixed with sand and water before passing through the molding process, which shapes them into the structure of bricks. Each brick is separated from the other one, coming out of the mold, with the help of a wire cutter. 

In the further process, the bricks are collectively kept in a drying oven for 24 to 48 hours, to take out any extra moisture. After the drying process, the bricks are kept in two different chambers of different temperature ranges. The temperatures in those kilns vary from 200 degrees to 1300 degrees centigrade. Once, the heating process is over, then the bricks are allowed to cool down for 48 to 72 hours before being sent for packing and further for delivery to required sites. 

Overall, the process of bricks making is a collection of several steps and all steps are so interlinked with each other that any lapses in one can ruin the quality of the final product. 

 Band: 7.0 

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Sample Answer: 2

The above mentioned diagram shows the process of brick production. There some stages involved in brick manufacturing.

First of all the, clay is collected by the help of a digger machine which is then transferred to a metal grid. In the second stage, after straining from metal grid it is rolled up by the roller. The third stage, it is mixed up with the sand and water and then made up as a brick either by wire cutting or by mold. In the second last stage, it is dried by a drying oven for 24 to 48 hours. After drying stage, it is passed to kiln with moderate temperature of 200 degrees centigrade to 980 degrees centigrade and then to kiln with high temperature of 870 degree to 1300 degrees centigrade.

After kiln, is this transferred to a cooking chamber for 48 to 78 hours and then it is ready to be packaged. The package are ready to delivered by the transport to a desired location.

Band: 6.0