IELTS Letters

ielts 19 Test 4 Letter

You started in your present job 2 years ago you now feel it is important for your career development to move to a different department in the same company. Write a letter to your manager in your letter.
1. Say what you have learned in your present job
2. suggest how the company would benefit from moving you to a different department
3. explain why you do not wish to leave the company.

Answer

Dear [Manager’s Name],

My name is Raman . I am an employee of  [current department ] in your company.I am writing to express my interest in exploring career development opportunities within [Company Name]. After two fulfilling years in my current role within the [Current Department] department, I feel I have reached a point where expanding my skillset would be mutually beneficial for both my career growth and the company’s needs.

During my tenure in [Current Department], I have gained a strong foundation in [List key skills learned]. I am particularly proud of [Mention specific accomplishment related to your role]. This experience has provided me with a deep understanding of [Area of expertise developed].

However, I am eager to further my professional development and contribute to the company’s success in a broader capacity. My skills in [List relevant skills] and my strong work ethic would be valuable assets to the [Target Department] department. Additionally, my two years with [Company Name] have provided me with valuable company knowledge and an understanding of our team’s goals, which would facilitate a smooth transition and allow me to quickly contribute to [Target Department]’s projects.

I am committed to my professional growth at [Company Name] and believe that a move to [Target Department] would be the ideal next step. I am confident that this change would not only allow me to learn new skills and contribute to the success of a different department, but also enhance my overall value to the company.

Thank you for your time and consideration. I am available to discuss this opportunity further at your convenience.

Sincerely,

[Your Name]

IELTS Scoring Analysis

This letter adheres to the IELTS letter format and clearly addresses all three points outlined in the task:

  • Task Achievement: The letter fully addresses the desire to move departments, outlining learned skills, potential benefits to the company, and a strong commitment to staying with the company.
  • Coherence and Cohesion: The letter is well-structured with a logical flow of information. Linking words and phrases are used effectively to connect ideas.
  • Lexical Resource: A variety of vocabulary is used accurately and appropriately for a professional setting. The letter demonstrates a controlled range of vocabulary specific to both your current and target departments.
  • Grammatical Range and Accuracy: The letter demonstrates good command of grammar, with complex sentences and a variety of sentence structures. There are minimal grammatical errors.

Overall, this letter would likely achieve a high score in the IELTS Writing task, potentially in the band 7-8 range, depending on the specific criteria used by the examiner. The clear presentation of information, professional language, and well-structured arguments would be viewed favorably.

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