IELTS Academic writing: Numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year

The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of the surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Answer:

The table illustrates the number of people who visited Ashdown Museum prior to and following its renovation, whereas the pie charts display the satisfaction result of visitors in that time frame.

Overall, it is apparent that both the number of visitor and satisfaction increased after redevelopment.

It can be seen that only 74000 visitors came to the Ashdown Museum before its renovation, however this figure jumped to 92000 after the museum was remodeled.

The proportion of visitors who were very satisfied, doubled after the renovation, accounted to 35%. However, only 10% growth was seen in satisfied visitors before and after refurbishment, that is 30% and 40% respectively. The proportion of dissatisfied visitors decreased significantly from 40% to 15% following the renovation. Also, the percentage of visitors who were very dissatisfied reduced to half a year after the refurbishment, that is only 5%. In the same time. Meanwhile 5% of people gave no response for both the years.

Band 7